成人英文高級：課後小結範例

Hi Daniel,子翔你好：

Great session. We rehearsed the first five minutes of your client update twice, and the second run was noticeably calmer and more persuasive. Here is what we covered.今天上得很好。我們把你客戶簡報的前五分鐘演練了兩次，第二次明顯更沉穩，也更有說服力。以下是今天的重點。

Today we… · 今天我們…

• 🎤Rehearsed your project update for next Tuesday's client call, using Point, Reason, Example, Point.用「論點、理由、例子、論點」的架構，演練你下週二客戶會議的專案進度報告。
• 🕊️Practised softening: turning "This is wrong" into "I'm not sure this is quite right."練習「緩和語氣」：把「這是錯的」改成「我不太確定這樣是否完全正確」。
• 🎯Showed how sure you are with the right words: will, should, might, could.用對的字表達你有多確定：will、should、might、could。
• 💬Learned five meeting idioms your clients use all the time.學了五個客戶常用的會議慣用語。
• 🔊Fixed word stress in key technical words: PHOtograph, phoTOgraphy, photoGRAPHic.修正重要專業字的重音：PHOtograph、phoTOgraphy、photoGRAPHic。

Daniel's star moment · 子翔的亮點

⭐ In the second rehearsal, when I played the difficult client, you said: "That's a fair point. Could I suggest we look at the numbers together before we decide?" Calm, polite, and you kept control of the meeting.⭐ 第二次演練時，我扮演難搞的客戶，你說：「這個觀點很合理。我們決定之前，可以先一起看看數字嗎？」冷靜、有禮貌，而且你掌握住了會議的主導權。

Your English · 你的英文

Your own sentences from today, improved. · 今天你說的句子，改得更好。

I suggest you to check the data. → I suggest you check the data. 🔊suggest 後面不接 to：suggest you check 或 suggest checking。

We need to discuss about the timeline. → We need to discuss the timeline. 🔊discuss 後面直接接受詞，不用 about。

Your design has a big problem. → I think there might be an issue with the design. 🔊文法沒錯，但太直接。對客戶說話時，用 I think、might 和 an issue 會更得體。

New expressions · 新的說法 (tap to listen · 點一下聽發音)

Before next week · 下週之前

1. Record yourself giving the first two minutes of your update. Listen once just for word stress.錄下你報告的前兩分鐘，專心只聽一次重音對不對。
2. In one real email this week, soften one sentence that sounds too direct. Send me the before and after.這週在一封真正的電子郵件裡，把一句太直接的話改得委婉一點，把修改前後的句子傳給我。
3. Listen to my podcast episode below and note three expressions you would like to use yourself.聽下方我的 Podcast 節目，記下三個你自己想用的說法。

Ross's note · 老師的話

Daniel, your English was never the problem. Your ideas are clear. Now your tone matches them. Good luck on Tuesday, and tell me how it goes.子翔，你的英文從來都不是問題，你的想法很清楚，現在你的語氣也跟上了。祝你週二順利，再告訴我結果如何。

📅 Next class: Thursday 5 November, 8:30 p.m. Taiwan time, on Zoom. We'll debrief your client call.下一堂課：11月5日（星期四）晚上8點30分（台灣時間），Zoom 線上。我們會一起檢討你的客戶會議。