成人英语高级：课后小结示例

Hi Jason,子航，你好：

Great session. We rehearsed the first five minutes of your client update twice, and the second run was noticeably calmer and more persuasive. Here is what we covered.今天上得很好。我们把你给客户汇报的前五分钟演练了两遍，第二遍明显更沉稳，也更有说服力。以下是今天的重点。

Today we… · 今天我们…

• 🎤Rehearsed your project update for next Tuesday's client call, using Point, Reason, Example, Point.用“论点、理由、例子、论点”的结构，演练了你下周二客户电话会议上的项目进展汇报。
• 🕊️Practised softening: turning "This is wrong" into "I'm not sure this is quite right."练习“委婉表达”：把“这是错的”改成“我不太确定这样是否完全正确”。
• 🎯Showed how sure you are with the right words: will, should, might, could.用恰当的词表达你有多确定：will、should、might、could。
• 💬Learned five meeting idioms your clients use all the time.学了五个客户经常用的会议习语。
• 🔊Fixed word stress in key technical words: PHOtograph, phoTOgraphy, photoGRAPHic.纠正了关键专业词汇的重音：PHOtograph、phoTOgraphy、photoGRAPHic。

Jason's star moment · 子航的闪光时刻

⭐ In the second rehearsal, when I played the difficult client, you said: "That's a fair point. Could I suggest we look at the numbers together before we decide?" Calm, polite, and you kept control of the meeting.⭐ 第二次演练时，我扮演难缠的客户，你说：“这个观点很有道理。我们做决定之前，能不能先一起看看数据？”沉着、有礼貌，而且你始终掌控着会议。

Your English · 你的英语

Your own sentences from today, improved. · 你今天说的句子，改得更好了。

I suggest you to check the data. → I suggest you check the data. 🔊suggest 后面不接 to：要说 suggest you check 或 suggest checking。

We need to discuss about the timeline. → We need to discuss the timeline. 🔊discuss 后面直接接宾语，不用 about。

Your design has a big problem. → I think there might be an issue with the design. 🔊语法没错，但太直接了。跟客户说话时，用 I think、might 和 an issue 会更得体。

New expressions · 新的表达 (tap to listen · 点一下听发音)

Before next week · 下周之前

1. Record yourself giving the first two minutes of your update. Listen once just for word stress.把你汇报的前两分钟录下来，专门听一遍，只听重音对不对。
2. In one real email this week, soften one sentence that sounds too direct. Send me the before and after.这周在一封真实的工作邮件里，把一句太直接的话改得委婉一点，然后把修改前后的句子发给我。
3. Listen to my podcast episode below and note three expressions you would like to use yourself.听听下面我的播客节目，记下三个你自己也想用的表达。

Ross's note · 老师的话

Jason, your English was never the problem. Your ideas are clear. Now your tone matches them. Good luck on Tuesday, and tell me how it goes.子航，你的英语从来都不是问题。你的想法很清楚，现在你的语气也跟上了。祝你周二一切顺利，回头告诉我结果怎么样。

📅 Next class: Thursday 5 November, 8:30 p.m. Beijing time, on Zoom. We'll debrief your client call.下一节课：11月5日（星期四）晚上8点30分（北京时间），Zoom 线上。我们会一起复盘你的客户会议。